Plot:
My thriller story is based on a woman who has left her husband as he isn't good enough for her. The husband then begins to track down the woman with the initial intent to murder her. As he is chasing her through endless narrow alleyways, he then manages to get to her and shoots her leaving her bleeding all over the floor. But it turns out he has murdered the wrong woman and all this time his ex-wife has been watching him but he doesn't know.
Camera Angles:
1st shot: Your typical blond thriller woman running away, she takes of her shoes so she can run faster. Camera angles: Long shot of her running and a close up of her taking her shoes off.
2nd shot: Tall all black man wearing a big baggy black coat, with a straight in his hand following her. Camera angles: long shot of him behind and close up of him lighting his straight.
3rd shot: Woman turns into an alley way and is running up it then all of a sudden man appears out in front of her and then “bang”. The man has shot her in the stomach. Camera angles: tilted shot of her running up the alley way then close up of her face when she gets shot. You can hear her take her last breath, this should add into thriller genre.
4th shot: Woman falls to the ground, dead on the floor. The man pulls out a photo of him and her together, rips it up in half and drops it on her dead body then walks off. Camera angles: When she falls to the floor the camera angle is an extreme long shot of her falling from behind, then a close up on the floor of her face. Close up of the photo as well.
5th shot: Camera pans up to the sky clear night sky, then credits roll in.
A nice twist to your plot and a good cliff hanger. Do give your characters names, ages and some idea of their occupations. You need to explain the intense jealousy of the husband and briefly explain why his wife has left him. This would inform your actors.
ReplyDeleteAlso who is the woman the husband shoots. Names please Peter.